Supergirl Revealed

by peter26_2001

April, 2002 Supergirl Story ContestWinner

Another normal day - for Becca/ alias Supergirl... By day ahigh-powered office worker for Chemco Industries - with an excitingdouble identity that no-one was aware of.. Until one fateful day..

After hearing of another crime unfolding - Becca began to make thedramatic transformation into the sassy super heroine..Running up analleyway - she carefully checked for any watchers... before sheddingher everyday clothes - to reveal the tight curves of the Supergirlcostume.. Just above her - out of view, a pair of eyes feverishlywatched every move.. Hunched up behind a crate - Doombringer had beenwaiting for the moment to strike: weeks of planning had gone into herlatest robbery.. But by a sheer freak chance she had stumbled uponsomething altogether more interesting.. The robbery had beenabandoned.. "At last-I know who you are" she hissedquietly.. "Not yet... though....go catch your criminals..like agood little girl... I'll be waiting...I'll see YOULATER".. Unbeknownst to Becca, Doombringer had seen everything,even from the point where she walked out of the office building..

Later that day.. Becca heard a knock on the door of her office.. Ayoung woman entered, dressed in business clothes, with glasses.."Hi - can I introduce myself? I'm Karen Lang.. I'm new here.. And- well i'd been told that you were the best person to seefirst.." a pause lingered while Becca gave her a stare.."You know - show me the ropes - kinda thing.." Karenwaited.. "Hmmm.. well pleased to meet you Karen - welcome to thecompany - I'm very busy right now.. but if you want a quick chatthen-" "GREAT" Karen marched in, swiftly closing thedoor behind her.. "Have a -" Becca stopped, as Karen hadalready sat down... Becca moved around the desk, and eased herselfback into her own chair.. They stared at each other for a few awkwardseconds - this stranger was giving her some really strange looks."Sorry what's your name again?" "Here'smy... CARD".. quickly, 'Karen' pulled a small object out of herpocket which began emitting green fumes, and thrust it in Becca'sface. The room began spinning around her, as she began to feelhelpless.. As her limp body slumped on to the desk, Karen stood up-watching her like a predator stalks it's prey..

Becca awoke, lying on the floor.. Her blouse was undone, revealingthe "S" of her Supergirl outfit, and she could not feel thereassuring tightness of her powerbelt around her waist. "Youmust show FEAR before Doombringer" a harsh voice called out fromout of view..

Still groggy, Becca remained on her back.. A pair of black bootscame into view beside her head, and before she knew it she waswrenched up onto her weak legs.. For the first time she saw herattacker.. Clad in a tight black bodysuit, Doombringer stood beforeher, staring her out. Becca had encountered her before, and had alwaystriumphed - but that was as Supergirl.. As Becca, she was helplessagainst the might of Doombringer!

Using the element of surprise, Becca thrust out towards Doombringerwith her arms outstretched - trying to overbalance her.. But insteadshe walked straight into the powerful grip of the evilvillainess.. Squeezing tightly, Doombringer held Becca in a deadlybearhug, causing her face to contort in agony.. But it was too earlyyet.. too easy... Her captor wanted to see her suffer somemore.. Loosening her grip, she let Becca go, watching her body flop tothe ground.

Looking down at her helpless body - she could not believe that thisweakling was really Supergirl. How she would delight in destroyingher.. But something wasn't right. Crouching down - Doombringer beganpeeling off Becca's office clothes, revealing the tight curvaceousoutfit of Supergirl. Suddenly, outside there came the noise ofapproaching high heels..

"Becca, can I come in?" there was a light tap at thedoor.. It was Sharon - her colleague.. As Becca knew only too well,Doombringer was capable of inflicting severe pain, and even killingwithout a second thought.. She began to shout a warning - but it wastoo late.. As the door opened, the evil villainess pounced on theclueless office worker.. Knocking her onto her knees with a savageblow, she then trapped her between her thighs, increasing thepressure- until Sharon passed out onto the floor.. Doombringer'sglance suddenly darted over across the room, where she noticed thatSupergirl was trying to crawl away from her on her knees.. Grabbinghold of Supergirl's cape, she yanked it towards her, causing thehelpless heroine to tumble into her arms..

"I have something that YOU want." she hissed into Becca'sear, as she held her from behind in a tight grip.."I have the KEYto your power - you cannot stop me now - superWIMP!!" "MY.....POWERBELT!" Becca gasped..

Suddenly, as if a new thought had occurred to her, a smile brokeout over Doombringer's face.. She looked Supergirl up and down with awicked smile.. Whilst Becca's top half was the Supergirl outfit, herbottom half was still her office clothes.

"How will you explain THIS one to your friend when she comesround?" Doombringer laughed, as she finished tying Becca to thelimp upright body of Sharon.. Becca struggled, but the bonds were tootight - holding her in a vice-like grip. She looked up as Doombringerbegan to leave the room..

Bending down, she moved her face close to Becca's, tauntingher.. She whispered - "I could defeat you now if i wanted toSupergirl.. With these hands, I could pummel your body until you areon your knees - begging for mercy.. But I want to humiliate you inpublic.. I know you'll come looking for me.. And when you do - I'll bewaiting for YOU"

(to be continued)


 

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